09.28.08

Stuck In The Elevator!

Posted in Story tagged at 1:07 pm by firststart

  

 

On the 30th floor of a very prestigious building in a very prestigious neighborhood, all the neighbors can hear the screaming of Mr. and Mrs. Daniel having one of their silly fights again….! Today it seems that they both had enough. “That’s it …..I can’t take it any more …I want a divorce”. A few minutes passed after Mrs. Daniel had said that and the answer from her husband was, ” I’m ready for it”. They agreed on separating and living in different apartments. They both packed up their bags quietly. They went down the elevator. They were standing there back to back, thinking of what they have been through for the last 3 years of their marriage.Suddenly the elevator stopped on the 15th floor. They turned around looking to each other and trying to understand what happened. Mrs. Daniel pressed many buttons to let the elevator up or down. But there was no good. They tried many ideas to get out but none of them worked. She panicked and was scared. Her husband calmed her down and they both sat on the elevator’s floor. She remembered many of the good moments of their life together and he remembered their first date. They looked at each other and realized that their happiness can’t be achieved by a divorce. After a while of romantic feelings passing by their hearts. The elevator moved again but this time they didn’t push the “G” button, they both put their pointers on the ”30th” button…..!!

2 Comments »

  1. Ahmed Ayad said,

    Great… this is a first step for a great writer…

  2. حسام نور الدين said,

    brillant treatement of your idea, you got the point by condensing the action,and inner feelings inside the both charechters..
    it is not available to any one
    you are talented
    how i am proud of your talent!!
    hope to read litterature more and more in the Arabic and english languages….
    Congrats…


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